Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
9/21/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #1 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
MY SPECIAL EDUCATIONAL
Educational is our way to grow up. We must through educational to impove your bility . In my opinion, educational is study everything. It is important park for us. In my whole educational , I think I have a great time . We can learn more knowledge at the school. IF you want to ask me which level you like ,I will tell everybody that is in high school in my deep .Because in high school ,I learned more about everything .
I remember my fist day when I got into the high school that is higher than other school at that moment in 2002.When I was in the class ,one teacher who is a little women ,came into the class .she introduced herself that was so funny .Her first name is FU(Chinese name).She said that her family wanted her to be a rich women, but she became a teacher ,”Fortune does pleasing ,right ?” she said. So we can remember her easy .
when I got in high school , I lost myself easy at that time.so I did not know how to study and how to live together with my roommate .my teacher knew that.so she told to me ,she said “you are an adult ,you want to know what you can do .you are difficult to get in this school ,DO you want to give up this ? you need to thing about you future and you family ,you must make clear for your family . Next time , you must tell everybody you are good.” I heared that conversation, suddenly I knew why I was here .I must get into the collage , a great collage , this is my first job. Then ,I can find the great job, this is my life. And now ,I must learn more knowledge to impove myself .
From now on, we know my future and how to do .I got up early and came to study .I am not smart , but I must study more to make sure I can follow my course .I have a big problem that I tend to go overboard on one or some subjects. My teacher helped me and analyse how to study .She often coached and encouraged me. At last I made more friends at the school , now are my best friends. At last I can get in the collage , althought it is not the best school. In my collage ,I often think my teacher, if she did not help, I can not have my future or without a good future . I am so thank my teacher that can help me to the right way.
In our life , we can met a lot of people .but who can help you who can hurt you ,so you must know how to choose .If you choose right ,that maybe chance your life . I've learned that my education and my life are far from over, but that life and education are a journey. You cannot go through life and learn nothing, for to even make the realization that you know nothing, you've also realized that there is so much else in life.
9/21/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #1 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
MY SPECIAL EDUCATIONAL
Educational is our way to grow up. We must through educational to impove your bility . In my opinion, educational is study everything. It is important park for us. In my whole educational , I think I have a great time . We can learn more knowledge at the school. IF you want to ask me which level you like ,I will tell everybody that is in high school in my deep .Because in high school ,I learned more about everything .
I remember my fist day when I got into the high school that is higher than other school at that moment in 2002.When I was in the class ,one teacher who is a little women ,came into the class .she introduced herself that was so funny .Her first name is FU(Chinese name).She said that her family wanted her to be a rich women, but she became a teacher ,”Fortune does pleasing ,right ?” she said. So we can remember her easy .
when I got in high school , I lost myself easy at that time.so I did not know how to study and how to live together with my roommate .my teacher knew that.so she told to me ,she said “you are an adult ,you want to know what you can do .you are difficult to get in this school ,DO you want to give up this ? you need to thing about you future and you family ,you must make clear for your family . Next time , you must tell everybody you are good.” I heared that conversation, suddenly I knew why I was here .I must get into the collage , a great collage , this is my first job. Then ,I can find the great job, this is my life. And now ,I must learn more knowledge to impove myself .
From now on, we know my future and how to do .I got up early and came to study .I am not smart , but I must study more to make sure I can follow my course .I have a big problem that I tend to go overboard on one or some subjects. My teacher helped me and analyse how to study .She often coached and encouraged me. At last I made more friends at the school , now are my best friends. At last I can get in the collage , althought it is not the best school. In my collage ,I often think my teacher, if she did not help, I can not have my future or without a good future . I am so thank my teacher that can help me to the right way.
In our life , we can met a lot of people .but who can help you who can hurt you ,so you must know how to choose .If you choose right ,that maybe chance your life . I've learned that my education and my life are far from over, but that life and education are a journey. You cannot go through life and learn nothing, for to even make the realization that you know nothing, you've also realized that there is so much else in life.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
10/9/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #2 LEVER3A
Draft 3
Galileo and Roxie
When you read some books , you would be attract by plot ,setting, character , symbol, and point of view at these books. I read the book at first , I must interest the character. Every book has different character, they are soul at the book. Like in the “the life of Galileo” Galileo and in the” Chicago” Roxie, they are both the lead character. They have the same and the different.
Roxie and Galileo both are famous. Famous Roxie is based on the above lies. Famous Galileo is through his efforts. Roxie is a famous singer and dancer. Galileo is a famous for scientist , but Roxie lied to everybody that she didn’t kill her lover, she has killed in self-defence. And when the new murderer appeared, she lost attention and she lied what she was pregnancy to attract everybody again. So she succeed and became famous in Chicago. Galileo created an astronomical telescope and used to observation object and in the Leaning Tower of Pisa in the "two iron ball at the same time be born" famous test. He supported the Copernican theory. So this is his success. His success is worth to us to learn.
They both need the money. When Roxie got into the jail , she had to get five thousand dollar to pay to Billy who was a lawyer can help her to be freedom and get some money to give the Mama who can buy something give her to change herself to become famous . But she didn’t have enough money. Her husband only had two thousand dollar that he borrowed his friends to give the lawyer and she worded in the jail to earn some money to pay Mama. The same, Galileo would make a large of experiment to improve what he thought that it was correct and he published his books. Before he was born in noble family , but his family already decline and fall .So he needed more money too. He tough some students and got some tuitions .They both are poor.
They wanted to be free. Roxie got into the jail , she must win the case so that she can come back home. She had to become famous , but she lied that she was pregnancy to attract everybody. At last she succeed to be free. Galileo got into the church because he proved the Copernican theory ,but at that ,Copernican word was banned . The earth turns around the sun is in violation of the bible . The church requested Galileo didn’t publicize this, but Galileo still continue . So he spent his last years persecuted by the church and was life in prison about twenty years.
Character is the indispensability of every book. They run through the whole book. Whatever the character is good or bad, when we know these characters , we can know the whole contects. This is important. Like “the life of Galileo” and “Chicago”, they can let us to understand these two books what are the theme.
10/9/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #2 LEVER3A
Draft 3
Galileo and Roxie
When you read some books , you would be attract by plot ,setting, character , symbol, and point of view at these books. I read the book at first , I must interest the character. Every book has different character, they are soul at the book. Like in the “the life of Galileo” Galileo and in the” Chicago” Roxie, they are both the lead character. They have the same and the different.
Roxie and Galileo both are famous. Famous Roxie is based on the above lies. Famous Galileo is through his efforts. Roxie is a famous singer and dancer. Galileo is a famous for scientist , but Roxie lied to everybody that she didn’t kill her lover, she has killed in self-defence. And when the new murderer appeared, she lost attention and she lied what she was pregnancy to attract everybody again. So she succeed and became famous in Chicago. Galileo created an astronomical telescope and used to observation object and in the Leaning Tower of Pisa in the "two iron ball at the same time be born" famous test. He supported the Copernican theory. So this is his success. His success is worth to us to learn.
They both need the money. When Roxie got into the jail , she had to get five thousand dollar to pay to Billy who was a lawyer can help her to be freedom and get some money to give the Mama who can buy something give her to change herself to become famous . But she didn’t have enough money. Her husband only had two thousand dollar that he borrowed his friends to give the lawyer and she worded in the jail to earn some money to pay Mama. The same, Galileo would make a large of experiment to improve what he thought that it was correct and he published his books. Before he was born in noble family , but his family already decline and fall .So he needed more money too. He tough some students and got some tuitions .They both are poor.
They wanted to be free. Roxie got into the jail , she must win the case so that she can come back home. She had to become famous , but she lied that she was pregnancy to attract everybody. At last she succeed to be free. Galileo got into the church because he proved the Copernican theory ,but at that ,Copernican word was banned . The earth turns around the sun is in violation of the bible . The church requested Galileo didn’t publicize this, but Galileo still continue . So he spent his last years persecuted by the church and was life in prison about twenty years.
Character is the indispensability of every book. They run through the whole book. Whatever the character is good or bad, when we know these characters , we can know the whole contects. This is important. Like “the life of Galileo” and “Chicago”, they can let us to understand these two books what are the theme.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
10/17/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #2 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
Obama and Romney
Once every four years the president election comes . As American citizen, you have a right to choose your love president. This year’s presidential candidates are Obama who is an incumbent president, and Romney who is the 70th Governor of Massachusetts. This is an unbiased comparison of the background , policies and positions of Barack Obama and Mitt Romney, candidates from the Democratic and Republican parties respectively in the 2012 election for President of the United States. I want to talk about their difference.
People who are Different background ,are different life. Obama ,who is the first black president of the United States, was born in Hawaii on August 4, 1961. He was raised with helping from his grandfather who served in Patton's army, and his grandmother who worked at a bank. He went on to attend law school where he became the first African-American president of the Harvard Law Review. Upon graduation, he returned to Chicago to help lead a voter registration drive, tough constitutional law at the University of Chicago and remained active in his community. Although he isn’t in a rich family, he through his own efforts, in order to lay the foundation him achievement. Romney ,who is businessmen, was born in Willard on March 12, 1947. Romney's occupation career began at the management consulting industry, after worked for Bain & Company, and eventually became the company during the period of CEO, his success helped the company out of the crisis. On 2002, Mr. Romney was elected to the United States governor of Massachusetts, but on 2006 he didn’t re-electior.
In the first debate, they raised the different plan. In the medicare, Obama wants to insist his obamacare ,but Romney wants to repeal it ,because it costs $2500 a family ,that is expensive, and it cuts $716 billion from medicare to pay for it, he wants to put that money back in medicare for the seniors. But as the poor people at the Unites States , if you have something wrong to go to the hospital ,it is very expensive if you don’t have medicare . But if we have got health insurance ,we can free to see the doctor . It is important for the poor people. Another aspect, we are the most concern is the economy, such as unemployment. Right now , American’s unemployment rate remains high . Most people have no job. Obama wants to create with the extended time limit tax cuts and the middle class, to training workers, start infrastructure construction, let the unemployment workers to return to the work force. Romney plans to release small business tax cuts, plans to create 12 million jobs . Romney is the businessmen , in the economy, he has a lot of advantage. In this respect he makes many voters cardiac.
As the Chinese , I care about the United States and China's development in the future. They also have different attitude in China . On the currency issue, Obama did not think that China's currency manipulation, since 2005, China of the RMB against the dollar exchange rate has risen by nearly a third, improves the labor and manufacturing cost. But Romney thinks that China's exchange rate artificially low, so that the Chinese products on the world market prices lower. Obama tries to solve the Unites States with china trade issues. But Romney is for strong trade confrontation plan with China .
The United States presidential election campaign has already gradually into the climax, one side is full of confidence incumbent President Obama, one side is proudly financial big alligator Romney, who can finally is elected the next President of the United States? Let us wait and see.
10/17/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #2 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
Obama and Romney
Once every four years the president election comes . As American citizen, you have a right to choose your love president. This year’s presidential candidates are Obama who is an incumbent president, and Romney who is the 70th Governor of Massachusetts. This is an unbiased comparison of the background , policies and positions of Barack Obama and Mitt Romney, candidates from the Democratic and Republican parties respectively in the 2012 election for President of the United States. I want to talk about their difference.
People who are Different background ,are different life. Obama ,who is the first black president of the United States, was born in Hawaii on August 4, 1961. He was raised with helping from his grandfather who served in Patton's army, and his grandmother who worked at a bank. He went on to attend law school where he became the first African-American president of the Harvard Law Review. Upon graduation, he returned to Chicago to help lead a voter registration drive, tough constitutional law at the University of Chicago and remained active in his community. Although he isn’t in a rich family, he through his own efforts, in order to lay the foundation him achievement. Romney ,who is businessmen, was born in Willard on March 12, 1947. Romney's occupation career began at the management consulting industry, after worked for Bain & Company, and eventually became the company during the period of CEO, his success helped the company out of the crisis. On 2002, Mr. Romney was elected to the United States governor of Massachusetts, but on 2006 he didn’t re-electior.
In the first debate, they raised the different plan. In the medicare, Obama wants to insist his obamacare ,but Romney wants to repeal it ,because it costs $2500 a family ,that is expensive, and it cuts $716 billion from medicare to pay for it, he wants to put that money back in medicare for the seniors. But as the poor people at the Unites States , if you have something wrong to go to the hospital ,it is very expensive if you don’t have medicare . But if we have got health insurance ,we can free to see the doctor . It is important for the poor people. Another aspect, we are the most concern is the economy, such as unemployment. Right now , American’s unemployment rate remains high . Most people have no job. Obama wants to create with the extended time limit tax cuts and the middle class, to training workers, start infrastructure construction, let the unemployment workers to return to the work force. Romney plans to release small business tax cuts, plans to create 12 million jobs . Romney is the businessmen , in the economy, he has a lot of advantage. In this respect he makes many voters cardiac.
As the Chinese , I care about the United States and China's development in the future. They also have different attitude in China . On the currency issue, Obama did not think that China's currency manipulation, since 2005, China of the RMB against the dollar exchange rate has risen by nearly a third, improves the labor and manufacturing cost. But Romney thinks that China's exchange rate artificially low, so that the Chinese products on the world market prices lower. Obama tries to solve the Unites States with china trade issues. But Romney is for strong trade confrontation plan with China .
The United States presidential election campaign has already gradually into the climax, one side is full of confidence incumbent President Obama, one side is proudly financial big alligator Romney, who can finally is elected the next President of the United States? Let us wait and see.
Yanlin weng(Teresa) Clip/QBCC
10/18/12 Mr.da Silva
Level 3A
As the CLIP student, we hope that we can go to college to experience college course and learn more about college. Today we went to English 101 for the college class. We experienced.
When I came into the English 101, all the students sat around, and no body sat the middle. I though this class is different, they also sat around, they said that they look each other face , and their professor can clearly know who don’t listen to her, sometime in the middle they play the game . I think it is funny. Today we played the game, before they talked about the book “when I was Puerto Rican?” We separated five groups to write about sigh, smell, taste, sound and touch on the blackboard. We had got at least 10 points, which group had at most points, which group won. I don’t know this book. I never see it . I think professor knew everyone read the book before, but the book have too much detail, and forger easy. So though this game, let us to remember and review the book.
In this class, there are no Chinese ,it is good for Chinese ,because we also speak Chinese in class , if we study in college , it must seldom Chinese ,so we have to speak English . I understood the class about sixty percent ,not too much . I think it is difficult for me , especial the professor explained the book, I almost didn’t understand . But I still look forward to the collage , because in collage I can learn more knowledge and look for one of fun. I enjoy this class , because it is funny and the professor was willing to help each other. She knew we were the new students in class , she told us how to enjoy the college class,how to learn more English. I remember we asked her “why do we study English again in collage?” . She said in collage there also have students from different country, they have different voices, the professor have to correct their pronunciations and strengthen their reading and writing ,make sure they learn the professional English.
From now on, I am more certain my further, I must go to the college as soon as possible,but I have to learn English well. I will make arduous efforts. College , I am coming.
10/18/12 Mr.da Silva
Level 3A
As the CLIP student, we hope that we can go to college to experience college course and learn more about college. Today we went to English 101 for the college class. We experienced.
When I came into the English 101, all the students sat around, and no body sat the middle. I though this class is different, they also sat around, they said that they look each other face , and their professor can clearly know who don’t listen to her, sometime in the middle they play the game . I think it is funny. Today we played the game, before they talked about the book “when I was Puerto Rican?” We separated five groups to write about sigh, smell, taste, sound and touch on the blackboard. We had got at least 10 points, which group had at most points, which group won. I don’t know this book. I never see it . I think professor knew everyone read the book before, but the book have too much detail, and forger easy. So though this game, let us to remember and review the book.
In this class, there are no Chinese ,it is good for Chinese ,because we also speak Chinese in class , if we study in college , it must seldom Chinese ,so we have to speak English . I understood the class about sixty percent ,not too much . I think it is difficult for me , especial the professor explained the book, I almost didn’t understand . But I still look forward to the collage , because in collage I can learn more knowledge and look for one of fun. I enjoy this class , because it is funny and the professor was willing to help each other. She knew we were the new students in class , she told us how to enjoy the college class,how to learn more English. I remember we asked her “why do we study English again in collage?” . She said in collage there also have students from different country, they have different voices, the professor have to correct their pronunciations and strengthen their reading and writing ,make sure they learn the professional English.
From now on, I am more certain my further, I must go to the college as soon as possible,but I have to learn English well. I will make arduous efforts. College , I am coming.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
10/22/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our brain, we can include a lot of information. In our life, we can do something if you like but don’t criminal. We have many things to do. But we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous. It can harm yourselves or sometimes you would forger something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especial while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes the accident easy, because driving is very difficult thing, you must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you maybe get the accident. Maybe you will get the minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and somebody’s life. I remember one time. I got the drive license soon. I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelling: “be careful, it is the cat .” I stopped my car as soon as, but I didn’t see the cat, I got off to find the cat. I was scare that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In Chinese there has one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your times to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people life , please don’t do one more thing at a time.
10/22/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our brain, we can include a lot of information. In our life, we can do something if you like but don’t criminal. We have many things to do. But we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous. It can harm yourselves or sometimes you would forger something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especial while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes the accident easy, because driving is very difficult thing, you must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you maybe get the accident. Maybe you will get the minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and somebody’s life. I remember one time. I got the drive license soon. I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelling: “be careful, it is the cat .” I stopped my car as soon as, but I didn’t see the cat, I got off to find the cat. I was scare that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In Chinese there has one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your times to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people life , please don’t do one more thing at a time.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
10/25/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 2
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our brain, we can include a lot of information. In our life, we can do something if you like but don’t criminal. We have many things to do. But we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous. It can harm yourselves or sometimes you would forger something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especial while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes the accident easy, because driving is very difficult thing, you must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you maybe get the accident. Maybe you will get the minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and somebody’s life. I remember one time. I got the drive license soon. I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelling: “be careful, it is the cat .” I stopped my car as soon as, but I didn’t see the cat, I got off to find the cat. I was scare that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
I remember the other thing that I did but I forget easy. When I was a kid, I like watch TV too much,but I have to finish my homework. The TV often started after class, so I didn’t want to miss. So I must do both at the same time. When I finished my homework, my mother asked me what I did and check my homework,but I did wrong ,and didn’t remember what I did . It is too bad .Because I separated my mind to do more things, I couldn’t remember more. That would make me losing my mind easy . Multi-tasking was working ,but I can’t handle it . So from now on , I must finish one thing , then continue to do another thing . It is also good for me.
In Chinese there has one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your times to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people life , please don’t do one more thing at a time.
10/25/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 2
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our brain, we can include a lot of information. In our life, we can do something if you like but don’t criminal. We have many things to do. But we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous. It can harm yourselves or sometimes you would forger something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especial while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes the accident easy, because driving is very difficult thing, you must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you maybe get the accident. Maybe you will get the minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and somebody’s life. I remember one time. I got the drive license soon. I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelling: “be careful, it is the cat .” I stopped my car as soon as, but I didn’t see the cat, I got off to find the cat. I was scare that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
I remember the other thing that I did but I forget easy. When I was a kid, I like watch TV too much,but I have to finish my homework. The TV often started after class, so I didn’t want to miss. So I must do both at the same time. When I finished my homework, my mother asked me what I did and check my homework,but I did wrong ,and didn’t remember what I did . It is too bad .Because I separated my mind to do more things, I couldn’t remember more. That would make me losing my mind easy . Multi-tasking was working ,but I can’t handle it . So from now on , I must finish one thing , then continue to do another thing . It is also good for me.
In Chinese there has one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your times to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people life , please don’t do one more thing at a time.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
10/26/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our life, we can do anything as you want but not to be criminal. We have many things to do,but we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous I think can happen. It can harm you or sometimes people would forget something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more people are coming dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especially while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes an accident easily, because driving is a very difficult thing. You must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you may get an accident. Maybe you will get minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and people’s lives. I remember one time,I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelled: “Be careful, it is a cat .” I stopped my car as soon as I could, but I didn’t see the cat. I got off to find the cat. I was worry that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
I remember the other thing that I did but I forget easy. When I was a kid, I like watch TV too much, but I had to finish my homework. The TV show often started after class, so I didn’t want to miss it. So I must do both at the same time. When I finished my homework, my mother asked me what I did and checked my homework, but I did wrong ,and didn’t remember what I did . It was too bad .Because I separated my mind to do more things, I couldn’t remember more. That would make me losing my mind easy . Multi-tasking was working ,but I couldn’t handle it . So from now on , I must finish one thing , then continue to do another thing . It is also good for me.
In Chinese there is one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your time to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people’s life , please you don’t do one more thing at a time.
10/26/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #4 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
Don’t do more than one thing at a time
In our life, we can do anything as you want but not to be criminal. We have many things to do,but we must do whole things at the limited time. Life is short, why don’t we do three things at a time? So many people like to do more than one things at a time in order to save time. Once let the brain processes two affairs at the same time, often inefficient or even dangerous I think can happen. It can harm you or sometimes people would forget something. So don’t do more than one thing at a time.
In the article called “how to do one thing at a time”, the author talked about multi-tasking. Multi-tasking is dangerous, like driving while talking and texting on the phone. Moreover, chatting with friends while sending out office electronic mail is seems harm. Our brain can’t handle multi-tasking because our brains can function limit. There is lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. At Stanford University, they made the experiment about multi-tasking. They separated two groups. One group of students was compiling a music playlist, chatting, and writing a short essay at the same time in the thirty minutes. Another group did the same ,but each task was for 10 minutes each. At the end they were giving a memory test. Single-tasters did better than multi-tasters. Researchers have found that high multi-tasters are less efficient than people who place their attention as fully as possible on one task at a time. There is a lot of evidence that shows our brain performs better while we focus one at a time. Not only that, the habit of constantly jumping from one thing to another actually lessens their brain’s capacity to stay focused on something important.
With the development of science and technology, more and more people use electronic products and more and more people are coming dependent on electronic products. Like the phone, computer, television, these products constantly improve our life, but at the same time they hurt our life, especially while you are driving, you are talking or texting on the phone. This action is very dangerous. It causes an accident easily, because driving is a very difficult thing. You must concentrate. If you don’t concentrate, you may get an accident. Maybe you will get minor wound, die or hurt somebody. So you must respect your life and people’s lives. I remember one time,I was driving, my friend was sitting near me, I was talking to him. Suddenly one cat was running on the road in front of my car. I didn’t see it, my friend yelled: “Be careful, it is a cat .” I stopped my car as soon as I could, but I didn’t see the cat. I got off to find the cat. I was worry that the cat died. But it was lucky, the cat was under the car, I didn’t hit it. From now on, I must very dedicated drive, I must pay the attention for driving. I can’t let it happen second time. Once again proof that you don’t do more than one thing at a time.
I remember the other thing that I did but I forget easy. When I was a kid, I like watch TV too much, but I had to finish my homework. The TV show often started after class, so I didn’t want to miss it. So I must do both at the same time. When I finished my homework, my mother asked me what I did and checked my homework, but I did wrong ,and didn’t remember what I did . It was too bad .Because I separated my mind to do more things, I couldn’t remember more. That would make me losing my mind easy . Multi-tasking was working ,but I couldn’t handle it . So from now on , I must finish one thing , then continue to do another thing . It is also good for me.
In Chinese there is one proverb:” you can’t have your cake and eat it too.” That means you can’t own two things at the same time. So sometimes you should give up one thing. If you don’t have time to do more, you should separate your time to do one thing that it is really important. For your life and other people’s life , please you don’t do one more thing at a time.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
11/2/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Recently we watched the movie“the name of the Rose” in the class, and we read the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is catholic feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story is beginning by murder. The murder was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murder didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about Science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that any teacher of the public schools to teach any theory that denies the creation of man as taught in the bible. Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose was happening on northern Italy mountain , that was filled with religious , they didn’t want to break . this was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murder was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill who obstructed him. But that’s place was poor,they needed the new thing to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their riligous,so they needed both together.
11/2/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Recently we watched the movie“the name of the Rose” in the class, and we read the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is catholic feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story is beginning by murder. The murder was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murder didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about Science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that any teacher of the public schools to teach any theory that denies the creation of man as taught in the bible. Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose was happening on northern Italy mountain , that was filled with religious , they didn’t want to break . this was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murder was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill who obstructed him. But that’s place was poor,they needed the new thing to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their riligous,so they needed both together.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
11/8/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 2
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Let’s talk about the movie“the name of the Rose” and the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. But one is through strange books to reflect religious, one is through people who don’t believe Darwinian theory of evolution to reflect religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is catholic feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story is beginning by murderer. The murder was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murderer didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that the teacher of the public schools to teach Darwinian theory of evolution . Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose was happening on northern Italy mountain , that was filled with religious , they didn’t want to break . this was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murderer was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill who obstructed him. But that’s place was poor, they needed the new thing to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their religious, so they needed both together. Inherit the wind is the same. In the course of the religious and science what struggled, this is no win and fail. At the end ,the lawyer brought both book, one is bible, stand for religious, one is Darwinian theory of evolution, stand for science. So this is win-win. Because the lawyer knew that human is progress, but we can’t leave the religious. We have to have one believe. So we can’t leave whatever one.
11/8/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 2
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Let’s talk about the movie“the name of the Rose” and the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. But one is through strange books to reflect religious, one is through people who don’t believe Darwinian theory of evolution to reflect religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is catholic feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story is beginning by murderer. The murder was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murderer didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that the teacher of the public schools to teach Darwinian theory of evolution . Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose was happening on northern Italy mountain , that was filled with religious , they didn’t want to break . this was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murderer was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill who obstructed him. But that’s place was poor, they needed the new thing to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their religious, so they needed both together. Inherit the wind is the same. In the course of the religious and science what struggled, this is no win and fail. At the end ,the lawyer brought both book, one is bible, stand for religious, one is Darwinian theory of evolution, stand for science. So this is win-win. Because the lawyer knew that human is progress, but we can’t leave the religious. We have to have one believe. So we can’t leave whatever one.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
11/14/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or same books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Like the movie“ the name of the Rose” and the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. But one is through strange books to reflect religious; and the other is through people who don’t believe Darwinian Theory of evolution to reflect religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is Catholic Feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story began with murderer. The murderer was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murderer didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that the teacher of the public schools to teach Darwinian theory of evolution . Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. Through two lawyer defendant on the court, the judge only requite Cates to pay one hundred dollars. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose happened on Northern Italy Mountain, that was filled with religious and traditions, they didn’t want to break them . This was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murderer was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill people who obstructed him. But its place was poor, and they needed the new things to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their religion, so they needed both together. Inherit the wind is the same. In the course of the religious and science what struggled, this is no win and fail. At the end ,the lawyer brought both book, one is bible, stand for religious, one is Darwinian theory of evolution, stand for science. So this is win-win. Because the lawyer knew that human is progress, but we can’t leave the religious. We have to have one believe. So we can’t leave whatever one.
When you know each book’s conflict, you would know more about its content. Conflict is the indispensability of every book. They run through the whole book. It can bring you into the book,and amazing you are the part of books. Generally, the conflict bring you came into the climax,and attract you continuous to read the book.
11/14/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay #5 LEVEL 3A
Draft 3
the name of the Rose and inherit the wind
When we watch the movies, plays or same books, we always want to find their similar and different in order to insight. Like the movie“ the name of the Rose” and the book “inherit the wind”. I discover that they both are about religious. But one is through strange books to reflect religious; and the other is through people who don’t believe Darwinian Theory of evolution to reflect religious. So I want to compare and contrast them.
They both are theology and philosophy combined. The name of the Rose is Catholic Feudal forces against the rule. It is about a murder mystery centered at a background of political, philosophical and theological events and discussions. But this story began with murderer. The murderer was afraid of the propaganda of the truth "strange book" will affect people to Catholic doctrines beliefs. He saw uncovering conspiracy ,and set fire to library. At the end a man risk his lives saved a number of precious wealth of human civilization. The murderer didn’t want the people to change their beliefs. Inherit the wind is about science and religion. A teacher was arrested because he violated the law at that time, and said in the classroom that Darwin’s theory of the descent of man. It’s unlawful that the teacher of the public schools to teach Darwinian theory of evolution . Hence, this event caused a stir in Tennessee, even in America at that time. Through two lawyer defendant on the court, the judge only requite Cates to pay one hundred dollars. At the end , science won religion.
As a citizen of today’s society, I can’t say science is everything and there’s no God in the world. I can’t say religion is everything and science is wrong. We need both. The name of the Rose happened on Northern Italy Mountain, that was filled with religious and traditions, they didn’t want to break them . This was the one that they believed. If you want to change ,you must die. So the murderer was for protecting the religious, he was willing to kill people who obstructed him. But its place was poor, and they needed the new things to change it. So they needed those books. But they wouldn’t give up their religion, so they needed both together. Inherit the wind is the same. In the course of the religious and science what struggled, this is no win and fail. At the end ,the lawyer brought both book, one is bible, stand for religious, one is Darwinian theory of evolution, stand for science. So this is win-win. Because the lawyer knew that human is progress, but we can’t leave the religious. We have to have one believe. So we can’t leave whatever one.
When you know each book’s conflict, you would know more about its content. Conflict is the indispensability of every book. They run through the whole book. It can bring you into the book,and amazing you are the part of books. Generally, the conflict bring you came into the climax,and attract you continuous to read the book.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
11/19/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Midterm Essay LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
How to do resumes
In our lives, job is a part of our lives. We have to earn some money to spend something what we need. So job is important for everyone. But how can we get the job? First we need the resume that it is including your education, experience and so on. Second, after the employers look your resumes, they will plan you to interview. So resumes are necessary and important for us who are looking for the job. I think resumes must attract employers to look it.
In the article “ Beauty Discrimination During a job Search”, a new study suggests men who look handsome can look for work easy. And through research, two applications were sent to employer. One had a photograph in the resumes, another research was employers sought interviews with 14.5 percent of the job candidates.19.9 percent of male candidates were called in for interview because they sent attractive picture in the resumes, and 13.7 percent of the man with “plain”photo. But only9.2 percent of the men were called to interview because of without picture on this research easy. I think we are the first meeting is important. Because when we are meeting at first time ,we don’t know each other. So we have to look your face,you look bad or good, that we can know at first time. So the employers are too. They look your picture in your resumes at the first time, so that they can depend on the first time to get your interview. I remember when I worked in a company in China. I was accounting, because I wanted to leave, so boss told me that I had to interview one person to get my job. I looked for their resumes. First I looked the picture , if they didn’t have picture , I never continuous to look it. So at that time ,I think that putting the picture on your resumes is necessary and important.
But now I am in Unites State, I heard my English teacher said that they never use the photo on the resumes. I didn’t know why. Lately, I understand. Because it is not fair for some people . if you look handsome or beautiful , you can get the interview easy, but if you don’t ,you look common, you get the interviews more difficult than they look good. It is not fair. So I think that they don’t put the photo on the resumes is better. It depends your skill, your experience, your education to get the interviews, then get the job, it is best. Because it is not the modal company , they don’t want the handsome men or beautiful women, they need the people who have power, have more skill, experience and manger ,lead skill and so on. So you must strong your skill to get the new job, but you don’t only put the attractive picture.
Do the better resume is important for the people who want to get the new job. Don’t only put the attractive picture to attract employer, it is no good. So we must strong our skill.
11/19/12 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Midterm Essay LEVEL 3A
Draft 1
How to do resumes
In our lives, job is a part of our lives. We have to earn some money to spend something what we need. So job is important for everyone. But how can we get the job? First we need the resume that it is including your education, experience and so on. Second, after the employers look your resumes, they will plan you to interview. So resumes are necessary and important for us who are looking for the job. I think resumes must attract employers to look it.
In the article “ Beauty Discrimination During a job Search”, a new study suggests men who look handsome can look for work easy. And through research, two applications were sent to employer. One had a photograph in the resumes, another research was employers sought interviews with 14.5 percent of the job candidates.19.9 percent of male candidates were called in for interview because they sent attractive picture in the resumes, and 13.7 percent of the man with “plain”photo. But only9.2 percent of the men were called to interview because of without picture on this research easy. I think we are the first meeting is important. Because when we are meeting at first time ,we don’t know each other. So we have to look your face,you look bad or good, that we can know at first time. So the employers are too. They look your picture in your resumes at the first time, so that they can depend on the first time to get your interview. I remember when I worked in a company in China. I was accounting, because I wanted to leave, so boss told me that I had to interview one person to get my job. I looked for their resumes. First I looked the picture , if they didn’t have picture , I never continuous to look it. So at that time ,I think that putting the picture on your resumes is necessary and important.
But now I am in Unites State, I heard my English teacher said that they never use the photo on the resumes. I didn’t know why. Lately, I understand. Because it is not fair for some people . if you look handsome or beautiful , you can get the interview easy, but if you don’t ,you look common, you get the interviews more difficult than they look good. It is not fair. So I think that they don’t put the photo on the resumes is better. It depends your skill, your experience, your education to get the interviews, then get the job, it is best. Because it is not the modal company , they don’t want the handsome men or beautiful women, they need the people who have power, have more skill, experience and manger ,lead skill and so on. So you must strong your skill to get the new job, but you don’t only put the attractive picture.
Do the better resume is important for the people who want to get the new job. Don’t only put the attractive picture to attract employer, it is no good. So we must strong our skill.
Yanlin Weng (Teresa) CLIP/QBCC
12/7/2012 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay test LEVEL 3A
Children are not only every patent’s wish, but also every country wish. Parents and country’s future dependent them. So many parents spoil their children too much. Especially when they were children, parents would give them whatever they want. In this spoil environment, these children would become injured psychologically. So how do they become the independent people? Don’t be spoiling by your parents.
In the article, the author’s though: many parents spoil their children, in order that their children become injured psychologically, and they can accept the challenges of adult life. That is one important thing for the spoil children. Because when they were children, their parents gave them whatever they wanted. That affects their independent skill. They think that they don’t do anything but they can have everything easily. So that before they do something, at once they will think that parents will help them. They have dependent their parents, so they are difficult to get into the society when they grow up.
In china, spoiled children are more and more common and heaven, because Chinese number is too much, government set up that one family only can born one child. So a family only can have one child, this child is more important. Their parents want their children to grow up in the happiness family. as a result, these children don’t have stress and without goals. When they grow up, they don’t learn more about to achieve their goals. Especially when they need to find the job, they miss the opportunity easily and can’t accept the fail. They are difficult to get into society and can’t make friends. All of these will affect their life. They always dependent their parents, because their parents spoil their children too much.
In my city, many senior think that the boy is more important than girl. So these senior spoil the children more and more heavenly. I remember when I was child, my grandmother also spoil my brother, because she thought that boy is more important than girl, so she didn’t like me. My parent went out to work, she raise us at home. When she bought some food, she would hide, than she left and gave my brother, I got nothing. When my brother and I asked her to give us money to buy something, she only gave my brother, even though I cried, she never gave me. She spoiled my brother too much, so that he never did the house work and couldn’t cook. He played every day and didn’t like to study. He became self-sufficient, and didn’t know to respect people, he didn’t have friends, even he had friend, that friend wasn’t really treat in his heart, all because my grandmother spoiled him. After she death, my parent went home, and taught my brother what was wrong what was right, he could change better. If he didn’t change, the result he will become that nobody like him. So don’t spoil your children if you want to your children be great.
Children are important in every family, but you have to know what you do better to your children, maybe that are difficult for you, but you must learn how to do it. so if you want to your children become that everybody like him/her and become the useful people, you just don’t spoil your children.
12/7/2012 Teacher: Mr.da silva
Essay test LEVEL 3A
Children are not only every patent’s wish, but also every country wish. Parents and country’s future dependent them. So many parents spoil their children too much. Especially when they were children, parents would give them whatever they want. In this spoil environment, these children would become injured psychologically. So how do they become the independent people? Don’t be spoiling by your parents.
In the article, the author’s though: many parents spoil their children, in order that their children become injured psychologically, and they can accept the challenges of adult life. That is one important thing for the spoil children. Because when they were children, their parents gave them whatever they wanted. That affects their independent skill. They think that they don’t do anything but they can have everything easily. So that before they do something, at once they will think that parents will help them. They have dependent their parents, so they are difficult to get into the society when they grow up.
In china, spoiled children are more and more common and heaven, because Chinese number is too much, government set up that one family only can born one child. So a family only can have one child, this child is more important. Their parents want their children to grow up in the happiness family. as a result, these children don’t have stress and without goals. When they grow up, they don’t learn more about to achieve their goals. Especially when they need to find the job, they miss the opportunity easily and can’t accept the fail. They are difficult to get into society and can’t make friends. All of these will affect their life. They always dependent their parents, because their parents spoil their children too much.
In my city, many senior think that the boy is more important than girl. So these senior spoil the children more and more heavenly. I remember when I was child, my grandmother also spoil my brother, because she thought that boy is more important than girl, so she didn’t like me. My parent went out to work, she raise us at home. When she bought some food, she would hide, than she left and gave my brother, I got nothing. When my brother and I asked her to give us money to buy something, she only gave my brother, even though I cried, she never gave me. She spoiled my brother too much, so that he never did the house work and couldn’t cook. He played every day and didn’t like to study. He became self-sufficient, and didn’t know to respect people, he didn’t have friends, even he had friend, that friend wasn’t really treat in his heart, all because my grandmother spoiled him. After she death, my parent went home, and taught my brother what was wrong what was right, he could change better. If he didn’t change, the result he will become that nobody like him. So don’t spoil your children if you want to your children be great.
Children are important in every family, but you have to know what you do better to your children, maybe that are difficult for you, but you must learn how to do it. so if you want to your children become that everybody like him/her and become the useful people, you just don’t spoil your children.
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Yanlin Weng (Teresa)
CLIP/QBCC
12/12/12
Teacher: Mr.da silva
Research paper
LEVEL 3A
Draft2
In our life, we must have some constitution to protect our safe, however different country have the different judicial system to manager and protect their countries. Human rights are one part of the judicial. Human rights are the rights inherent to all human beings.China is the civilized country; there is most human right to protect people, in the United States too. Although Malaysia have lack of human rights, but there still have it. So everybody has human rights to enjoy.
Woman’s rights are one part of the human rights. Every country would set out some constitution to protect the women. Especially women’s position is more and more high. Women’s rights are the rights for the women to enjoy, something like voting right, to choose have baby or not, free to fall in love and so on. In some places these rights are institutionalized or supported by law, local custom, and behavior, but others they may be ignored or suppressed. Maybe they have their history and traditional bias to perform these rights.
Not only all the countries have comparative perfect women’s rights, but also some countries still have lack of women’s rights, and these countries often have low position for women. Especially for the marriage women, they need the some legal to protect them, every country the same. So I compare my country China, Unites State, Malaysia’s women’s rights. They have different legal to protect the marriage women.
According to international journal of Gynecology & Obstetrics (1999), this journal said about “The prevalence of domestic violence against pregnant women in a Chinese community: social issues in reproductive health”. Pregnant women are abused by their family. Pregnant women is weakly people, but some family use this weakly, violence to them, like domestic violence, abuse, force sex and so on. That is bad for pregnant women. But this is really happening in China. The law set out some constitution to allow the women have baby or not. But some family don’t protect them, otherwise they abuse them, especially pregnant women are in the bad emotion, like temperament is not good, they don’t like eat something, they will throw up, they will angry easily, in order that they family don’t know these problem, so that they do something bad for them.
We have to do something to protect the pregnant women that are important. In this increasingly development of the society, women’s rights are more and more important. It reflects on family. In China,women’ position is more and more high. But it is still very common in China for women to get abused, domestic violence, especially pregnant women. Many victim women don’t like to report abuse or get divorces because they are pressured to maintain family, they don’twant to get the help. But if they keep it, it will more and more increase their painful. Some women have trouble getting their laws and many women don’t know their rights and need to be help of them.
There are many organizations report women’s problems to authorities and suggest solutions. They also stress the fact that women want equality. In China, there are many constitutions to protect the women, if you need the help. The law bans the people who have domestic violence to his family appear in 200 miles by victim, and bans follow the tracks of victim. That is one way to protect the victim.
In the United States, government has been taken to improve education, health, family life for women, so women’ position is more and more high. They also have constitution to protect them. For the long time ago, women were not allowed to enjoy the rights. Along with the progress of society, women’s rights will be protecting, so the government pass some law about women’s rights. But women still have some problem, especially for the marriage women. Every year there are many marriage women to be a domestic violence, and the number is soaring. Some women were killed or ill-treat by their husband. It is normal in the United states.For the domestic violence women, they will get the different degrees of damage, not only the body, but also the psychological.
Now president have signed the three violence against women acts united states federal laws about end domestic violence, sexual assault, dating violence, and stalking. This law helped victim advocates and government to work together. They created prevention and victim support programs, punishment the certain violent crimes. The united stated federal law edict set out to ban weapon to people who have domestic violence. It is good for the women and protects them. If you need the help, also you can call on call 24 hours. That is free national domestic violence and helps the children to providing shelter and related help. For example, if a woman is a family violence, she can alarm apply for legal protection and apply for shelter. It is important for the victim woman; it can protect the woman will not the second damage.
In Malaysia, women rights are weakly protect. Women have low level in their family, especially for the marriage women. Some men have several wives, but they don’t need allow to their wives. Malaysian women who are married to non-Malaysian men and give birth to children outside of Malaysia cannot confer citizenship to their children; these children are considered foreigners, into Malaysia. When a child is born outside Malaysia, the child is not conferred citizenship by operation of the law unless the father is a Malaysian citizen. A child whose mother is a Malaysian citizen does not share the same privilege. The father must be a Malaysian citizen in order for the child to be conferred citizenship in Malaysia. It is not fair to the Malaysia women. They don’t have rights to decide which country their children belong.
For the marriage women, domestic violence is more and more serious. Every year there are many cases happen in Malaysia.Everyday women are subjected physical, sexual and psychological abuse that cut across race and class. But Laws relating to rape, domestic violence and sexual harassment are still inadequate, in order that they don’t have places to maintain their rights.
Muslim women continue to face hardships in cases of divorce, polygamy, custody, maintenance, and division of matrimonial property. There are shortcomings in law; it is not fair to the Muslim women. For instance, while a man can easily get divorce, the court is reluctant to grant a divorce without the agreement of her husband. These examples of unequal treatment are not a mere flaw of the law but it reflects a deeper value system by society. It is inequality and discrimination against women.
In conclusion, each country has big or small problems by the legal of women rights. Wemust continuo to prefer this constitution, in order that we can do better to protect the women. In the future, women’s position is more and more high; women’s right will appear more and more important. Let us to maintain our rights.
References
CLIP/QBCC
12/12/12
Teacher: Mr.da silva
Research paper
LEVEL 3A
Draft2
In our life, we must have some constitution to protect our safe, however different country have the different judicial system to manager and protect their countries. Human rights are one part of the judicial. Human rights are the rights inherent to all human beings.China is the civilized country; there is most human right to protect people, in the United States too. Although Malaysia have lack of human rights, but there still have it. So everybody has human rights to enjoy.
Woman’s rights are one part of the human rights. Every country would set out some constitution to protect the women. Especially women’s position is more and more high. Women’s rights are the rights for the women to enjoy, something like voting right, to choose have baby or not, free to fall in love and so on. In some places these rights are institutionalized or supported by law, local custom, and behavior, but others they may be ignored or suppressed. Maybe they have their history and traditional bias to perform these rights.
Not only all the countries have comparative perfect women’s rights, but also some countries still have lack of women’s rights, and these countries often have low position for women. Especially for the marriage women, they need the some legal to protect them, every country the same. So I compare my country China, Unites State, Malaysia’s women’s rights. They have different legal to protect the marriage women.
According to international journal of Gynecology & Obstetrics (1999), this journal said about “The prevalence of domestic violence against pregnant women in a Chinese community: social issues in reproductive health”. Pregnant women are abused by their family. Pregnant women is weakly people, but some family use this weakly, violence to them, like domestic violence, abuse, force sex and so on. That is bad for pregnant women. But this is really happening in China. The law set out some constitution to allow the women have baby or not. But some family don’t protect them, otherwise they abuse them, especially pregnant women are in the bad emotion, like temperament is not good, they don’t like eat something, they will throw up, they will angry easily, in order that they family don’t know these problem, so that they do something bad for them.
We have to do something to protect the pregnant women that are important. In this increasingly development of the society, women’s rights are more and more important. It reflects on family. In China,women’ position is more and more high. But it is still very common in China for women to get abused, domestic violence, especially pregnant women. Many victim women don’t like to report abuse or get divorces because they are pressured to maintain family, they don’twant to get the help. But if they keep it, it will more and more increase their painful. Some women have trouble getting their laws and many women don’t know their rights and need to be help of them.
There are many organizations report women’s problems to authorities and suggest solutions. They also stress the fact that women want equality. In China, there are many constitutions to protect the women, if you need the help. The law bans the people who have domestic violence to his family appear in 200 miles by victim, and bans follow the tracks of victim. That is one way to protect the victim.
In the United States, government has been taken to improve education, health, family life for women, so women’ position is more and more high. They also have constitution to protect them. For the long time ago, women were not allowed to enjoy the rights. Along with the progress of society, women’s rights will be protecting, so the government pass some law about women’s rights. But women still have some problem, especially for the marriage women. Every year there are many marriage women to be a domestic violence, and the number is soaring. Some women were killed or ill-treat by their husband. It is normal in the United states.For the domestic violence women, they will get the different degrees of damage, not only the body, but also the psychological.
Now president have signed the three violence against women acts united states federal laws about end domestic violence, sexual assault, dating violence, and stalking. This law helped victim advocates and government to work together. They created prevention and victim support programs, punishment the certain violent crimes. The united stated federal law edict set out to ban weapon to people who have domestic violence. It is good for the women and protects them. If you need the help, also you can call on call 24 hours. That is free national domestic violence and helps the children to providing shelter and related help. For example, if a woman is a family violence, she can alarm apply for legal protection and apply for shelter. It is important for the victim woman; it can protect the woman will not the second damage.
In Malaysia, women rights are weakly protect. Women have low level in their family, especially for the marriage women. Some men have several wives, but they don’t need allow to their wives. Malaysian women who are married to non-Malaysian men and give birth to children outside of Malaysia cannot confer citizenship to their children; these children are considered foreigners, into Malaysia. When a child is born outside Malaysia, the child is not conferred citizenship by operation of the law unless the father is a Malaysian citizen. A child whose mother is a Malaysian citizen does not share the same privilege. The father must be a Malaysian citizen in order for the child to be conferred citizenship in Malaysia. It is not fair to the Malaysia women. They don’t have rights to decide which country their children belong.
For the marriage women, domestic violence is more and more serious. Every year there are many cases happen in Malaysia.Everyday women are subjected physical, sexual and psychological abuse that cut across race and class. But Laws relating to rape, domestic violence and sexual harassment are still inadequate, in order that they don’t have places to maintain their rights.
Muslim women continue to face hardships in cases of divorce, polygamy, custody, maintenance, and division of matrimonial property. There are shortcomings in law; it is not fair to the Muslim women. For instance, while a man can easily get divorce, the court is reluctant to grant a divorce without the agreement of her husband. These examples of unequal treatment are not a mere flaw of the law but it reflects a deeper value system by society. It is inequality and discrimination against women.
In conclusion, each country has big or small problems by the legal of women rights. Wemust continuo to prefer this constitution, in order that we can do better to protect the women. In the future, women’s position is more and more high; women’s right will appear more and more important. Let us to maintain our rights.
References